 Paul-Hart 2004-05-26 . chapter 1Nice work. I don't really have any constructive criticism for this piece, maybe I could have received a little more information about the setting, a little more atmosphere would have made this even better. Okay, I guess I did have criticism, but what I had said is only a matter of opinion and...I'm going to stop myself from rambling further here. You're going on my Favorite Authors list. |