Hm. Very interesting, very interesting. Chuckle. It reminded me of something Poppy Z. Brite once wrote. Maybe of the twins in Lost Souls or something. Hm.

O. This is great. Very visual, understated poetic sort of style to it.

That was beautiful. I would also love to see the picture that inspired your work if you have it anywhere...if you don't then, that's fine. ^__^