This is another one of your poems that I really like--I read several of them. (You mentioned at one point that you had some of your best stuff on FanFiction.net. I think that's true of a lot of people here, myself included. ^_^) Anyway, they're all very good. I especially like the way that you made the sounds in each line of this poem rise at the beginning and fall at the end...good job. I really liked it. ^_^