O! cool.

Very nice work! I liked the rythm of it, well suited to the content.

That was very nice and so wonderful. I like it so very much. Keep on writing.
All the best to you.^-^v

i love that last line! you have really put a lot of wind in this.

Wow. Just...wow. You keep the same rhythm and metre throughout, and I like your rhyme scheme very much.
Hmm. How to put it...
The way you crafted this, I went from envisioning a big picture ("the ends of the earth," etc), to an idea ("For chaos is calling, and nothing shall stay"), to a specific picture ("Walk on the knife-blade /dance on the wave-crest," etc.), to a sort of melding of all of them.
I also find it nifty that...well, look at just the last line of each stanza. They have this pattern. It's cool. ^_^
This is long enough. You're on my favorite's list and such. Sorry if I managed to make no sense. In short, amazing poem.

That's really beautifully written, I don't know what else to say.