Hmm, I love the poem but I'm not sure if I should be sad or happy...so I'll choose both _ Nice work.

Heya! How're you doing today? I've got a few minutes while I'm waiting for things to run at work, so I'll take a look at some poetry...
Very nice poem. You did a nice job of realistically captivating her sense of loss.
The free form approach you used works very well. About the only thing I'd suggest is to get rid of the final *****. It just feels kind of strange to have it there, in the middle of a sentence.
Nicely done, and thanks!
Ruatha

I like it alot. It's...expressive.

Very sad. Good...just sad. You say it's not one of your best, and even though that is true, this has a great theme, feeling, etc. It doesn't need to be anything more than this because it is good just the way it is. Great job.

{cries} what dyu mean it's not one of your best? This was just really haunting and beautiful. Keep writing!

Very moving and gracefully written with style. The fact that it was written in 5 mins only enhances the fact that you have a natural talent.
I like this very much.
Well Done
Keep Writing!
F.C

Cool! Very nicely done! I love it. Awesome descriptions.
W,
The Great, the Mighty, the Orc King

Haunting. You know how to create a great atmposhere in your poem.

Wow. Thanks for all those reviews! 'A Meeting with Fate' is a completed story, though; otherwise, it'd say "Incomplete" in the summary. I do have a sequel up, however. And I've been considering writing a third story for those two characters for at least a year. If I could just think up a suitable plot...
Thanks again!

awe that is so sweet good job i like this
BrandyBear

That was nice. A little choppy, but still had a nice flow, if that made any sense. The ending was very effective too. Please R/R.

Sad... but sweet, in a way. It's nice that they are together again. This isn't my favorite layout for a poem, but it is still very touching. Love is a beautiful thing.