Very interesting. The rhymnes are very well done. Exellent work! :)

Really great poem. A lot of poems that rhyme are suffocated by the rhythm but this one wouldn't be nearly as good without it. Keep up the great writing.

yeah, questioning things in the middle of the night CAN give you a headache sometimes, ne?
poetry does help, though . . .
hope you can find release.

I can't even begin to explain how much I love a poem when it rhymes so well! Interesting ideas here, your creativity definately posses's flare! I hope you keep up the good work.
**Scars**
((By the way, thanks for the kind review.))

ahh, late night thoughts. i love writing late at night. awesome poem, and i can relate. we all have our doubts and questions, which will be answered in time. that's the greatest test of faith for me i think, patience for his answers, his voice. i often just ramble to him, without stopping to listen for his answer. anyway, i like this a lot. nice rhyming too, it works well with this poem, and flows nicely. well written, you expressed your feelings well. and he knows them, he understands what you're going through. as much as it may seem otherwise. nice work. keep writing.

Ideas of someting said after religion class racing though my head. Yeah, you know what I'm talking about.
Anyway, A., I can't help but feel a little responsible, I mean, you were pretty well off w/o me. But ... um, then again , who cares?
Nice job!
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Awesome! I'm a huge fan of ramblings and musings - I think they often are the best writings someone can do. Keep it coming.