I really liked this one. It was very nice. I was only 3 months and 21 days old then so...but that was good like all of your work. I don't think I've read one of your poems/songs/stories that I didn't like.

That's quite hilarious really. Thanks for the review on my story. August 15th, 1992 would be my third birthday, and I feel the same way every single time I see a home movie from around that time.
"That ** idiot on the screen, he used to be me."
That's a really great line. Nice job.

wow...this is so true...it's also kinda funny to see who you once was, in other words great job.

hehehe, in a grown up way, SO 2 FACED lol. i actually love it!

wow, its one of the most original song of this type ive seen on here. Great job

this is definitely different lol but i like it! :D i send my love!
-Skye

i like this.real or not.thanx for reviewing my "song".yeah.the elephant is a metaphor of the secret.it is something that is looming over you.you know that it's there and you are worried it'll keep getting bigger until it consumes your mind.
thanx
your irish lover

this was really good. I think a lot of people can actually realte, seeing how we long to go back to our childhood, ect.