 SwordoftheKing 2005-03-21 . chapter 1Weaving fabulous portraits of words,the emotions you portray are beautiful. This song is amazing, and I have one suggestion. When writing your summary, DO NOT SAY when you are not particularly sure if something is good. That, on its own, will push people away from whatever you've written. And in this case, it's something truly wonderful. |
 darkpaladin13 2005-03-20 . chapter 1 Wow . . . that was outstanding. I loved it, I could hear it in my mind . . . it was just stunning. I love duets, this was a great piece of work. |
 Wolfie Star26 2005-03-10 . chapter 1you should really think about writing songs for singers. you have a great talent at it. I loved it and hehe you missed memories to come. later. |
 Jengafa 2005-01-07 . chapter 1 Sweet. Something like that happened to me 2 years ago.
Oh, and, um... My friend? I made up with her the day before she stupidly died in a car accident.
But I digress, and I really love this poem/song. Love it! I'd favouritize, but I haven't signed up and couldn't be bothered to.
Larve it! Bai bai! |
 DarkKrystal 2004-11-20 . chapter 1Amazingly written, very well put together. You're better at this kind of stuff than you think you are. |
 Tullia 2004-09-04 . chapter 1To tell the truth, I'm not sure how to do songs either, but I think its cool. |
 Cloud Burst 2004-09-04 . chapter 1wow beautiful! just awesome! i think that this song should be for lovers, just change friend to love, cause its so intimate ;) |
 shef 2004-06-14 . chapter 1 the words are very touching (sentimental) if only i knew the tune that is in your head when you sing these words. It is BEAUTIFUL! |
 Helo Amadeo 2004-06-01 . chapter 1That's a very nice song! |
 Ardis Proulx 2004-05-28 . chapter 1Very nice song. I love the chorus but it feels like it needs to be a little longer. Not by much, but maybe a few lines? I really like the feel to it, you don't see many songs about friends so this is a great subject also. Keep up the writing! |