Reviews for The Vampire Nuada: Red Rivers

Reviews For: The Vampire Nuada: Red Rivers

TigerBlizzard 2006-02-27 ch 2,	abuseVery interesting, like the details, the rhymings cool, some misspellings, beautiful in its own right, I like it.
the world woke up without m... 2004-06-22 ch 2,	abuseAwesome, dude. I like the second one more than the first... it's probably just me, but the second one seems to flow better. I don't know. Anyway, keep on writing and rocking, dude!
Munchausen by Proxy 2004-06-17 ch 2,	abuseLovely, lovely lovely! You have a thing for vampires, don't you? From what I can see, your knowledge far expands mine on the subject, though this is not a hard task to accomplish, because my knowledge is very slight. These two poems have much feeling in them. I can really understand what Nuada (is that right? Nuada?) is saying, I can understand his actions. You made it so even someone who has not read all your work can grasp the happenings. I'm very glad I read this! The only thing I can see is that you tried very, very hard to make it rhyme. I am certainly no expert on poetry (seriously... I suck) and even more less of an expert on rhyming on poetry, but my advance (to be taken lightly) is to try less hard to rhyme. Maybe put a line of not rhyming between the two rhyming lines. That would probably be easier too 0.0 Anyways, twas lovely! It made me want to learn more about vampires, it did. Beautifully written and wonderfully expressed.
TheForgottenArtz 2004-06-15 ch 1,	abuseokay, i was the co-author Tragic was referring to :) I'm the calmer of the two of us (shut up Tragic, i am) -It was good, i thought it was rather short, but that's fine. I liked the descriptions in this poem, unlike the others which Tragic pointed out :)
W3DNESDAY 2004-06-14 ch 2,	abuseare you planning to continue this? or is this chapter only for the reader's benefit? i think the poem stands rather well by itself tries to compose herself as she stuggles not to break out in song MORE DROOLING! (i do a lot of that, just ask my co-author) AH!!
W3DNESDAY 2004-06-14 ch 1,	abusehahahha WHOANESS! the BEST rhyming poem that i've read today, and one of the best that i've ever read on ficpress (you've gotta admit that a ton of the stuff on this site is garbage) i LOVE it! muah! hello! i'd love you tell you why i love it so much.. but i-i..it's ALL of it! it's not overly dramatic or gory.. it RHYMES hallelujah! AND it's good lol i do like the blood.. there are some spelling errors that i almost forgot to mention as i was drooling all over you.. you might wanna look over it (just a couple of mistakes) AH! I'm gonna go tell my co-author to go read this.. skips away =) !! *beaming!

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