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| Shinji Boi69 2004-06-04 ch 1,   | This was cool. It seems alittle forced at the rhyming parts but it worked out o.k. i like it alot. Keep up the great work. |
| A.D Williams 2004-06-03 ch 1, | I loved this poem because SO MANY PEOPLE feel that way! And the answer should be "no you don't have to change ANYTHING" but in our damned world... yeah people are always looking for the "great this" or the "beautiful that" >< garg to them all! lol. This poem was very lovely, and since you wrote about such a great subject, you have worked your way to the favorite stories list. =) -Amber (Duckie the Literature Queen) |