I love this, the wording is just amazing.

My favorite lines: I want to sink my teeth into your mind./Suck your lovely.

Brilliant. Keep writing.

Hillary

wow. love this piece. I can relate to it pretty much in it's entirety. very nicely done.

if you get the cance you should review more of my work.

damn you and your tallent...okay maybe not but wow the emotions in this...just wow i am just going to say wow from now on cause WOW!!

AW~ That was good, you're improving soo much! Good job! it was beautiful. the whole point of being one and sharing eachother...lovely! Good job!
~Sandra~

The intensity of this is great! Write on!