Hey,We just had a major hurricane here in Florida. Just got my internet back today.

Very good chapter.

Poor Travisten, they're still trying to marry her off.

Changed pen name to keep Alnitak for better things. *_*

i really like this story plz update soon

nice cliff hanger I await for your next update

Okay, descriptions and dialogue are awkward here (especially the chexv). Then again, that's what the Lexicon's for.

WoW, what a girl!! That stunt with the boar was amazing. Travisten is surely brave if a bit foolish. Good scene.

For a minute, I thought she wouldn't win. Great chapter. *_*

Okay, I noticed a lot of grammar things. However, forty some years went by real fast. Explaining what changed (and what happened before) would be a decent idea, though I haven't read that far into it.

I'm so sorry not to have reviewed in so long but my internet is down and i can only read your stories from university computer lab. but i have a class n like 10 minutes so i just gotta say i love it!

oh so THAT's what happened...i really shouldn't have skipped so many chapters back in the email...update so we can read already... i still like this!

O! Now the story takes an interesting twist! Will the king be like the phantom or the hunchback, disfigured yet pittiable, or does his magled form reflect the character within? This is intriging. I wait to read more.

is the king really that evil? yikes! I really like your story, please update soon!

Sorry that this has to be a quickie review, but I am a bit rushed today.

These chapters were good but seemed a bit rushed as well. They don't savor the details of the story like the previous ones. Still, a good job.

nice ending, cant wait for the next chapter, You seem to have put her in a difficult situation how will she get out? hmm that is the question

I read straight to chapter six because I dislike cliffhangers. Sure me.

Gez... gez creeps me out. His actions and words, though few and far between, disturbed me. I don't like him. GREAT JOB! Making a character dislikable in so few words is a talent.

The end of chapter six was great as well. At least somone in this area seems to understand the concept of women's rights besides Travisten.

Chapter seven tomorrow!

I love your story, DUDE!! But Ringach, ugh.. I CAN'T STAND HIM, HE'S SSO REVOLTING AND.. EWW! Kavech's annoying, I like Travisten very much, and I don't understand why people pity Sechz, I think he deserves what Travisten did to him!Anywho update, and write more! -not requesting, demanding! hee hee.. see ya'!

Hm, is this going to be one of those unwanted romances? Poor Sechz, but he's a brave guy, confessing his love like that.

Good Job!! *_*