this is really really good! I can't wait to read more of your stories! I feel really sad for Jennifer and Tim. Can't believe Tim killed himself. Or did he? Anyway, GREAT JOB! I love this story!

Good begining. Can't wait for the para-normal things to happen.

So...he killed himself, then? It was an interesting story but I don't really understand why he went in the hot tub. I love staying in secluded cabins, but every time I do the slightest noise will creep me out. I've seen too many movies and read too many stories about these kinds of things. And yet I continue...

I'm sad now.. wow. Not at all like I expected it to end. Well... I'm not fond of tragic endings, I guess, but this is extremely well written. You wrote out Southern Dialect much better than I ever could, especially since I am from the south. Nicely done.

Wow, you have short chapters.

Oh my? Not something I've heard out of a married man recently...

Why do I have the feeling that this will not be a nice vacation as Dolly wished them? Hee hee hee...

That was really intriguing! I enjoyed that and how you kept the story moving at a fast pace. The twist towards the end was surprising but a good change.

Ohh, nice! And do they EVER end the way you plan? It reminded me a bit of Ghost Ship, the way he was in a hell and was made to gather souls.. That was really well written, and I thoroughly enjoyed it. I'll definately be reading more of your work!

AHA! I was right!...well, sort of. I simply MUST know, so I'm moving on!

Am I right in my assumption that the woman in the picture, Chester's wife, resembles Jennifer? Hm? And nice job with the shopping bit, you know shopping is a nice therapy tool!

Oh? I forced myself to review before moving on to the next chapter! I'm loving the quick and easy reading of this story..

Oh, nice detail in this chapter! And okay I was wrong about whose (who's? I never know which goes where!) grave it was. So if the grave is visible the ol' Chester is out and about right? And internet research! Gotta love it!

Lack of reviews is a mite depressing I'll agree.. That's why I rope my friends into reviewing my work.
You've got some good detail in this chapter, I could just see that sunset! And maybe it's not Chester's grave, maybe that of his murderer? I must find out!

*laughs loudly*

I lived the first 19 years and 11 months of my life in Arkansas and have now been living in Mississippi for a year and 9 days. I always say I don't have an accent, but as I was reading the 'dialect' bits, I didn't even hesitate. Guess that does mean I have an accent!
Now, on to the actual review part of my review. Once more, you're a very good writer and the only thing I can say is that the chapters are a bit short. But, that could just be an illusion because they're single spaced. *shrugs* Anyway on to the next chapter.

Just got back from a long weekend on the coast and thought I'd check out some of your longer works. I'm really liking this one so far. You've got a really good writing stlye that makes for extremely easy reading.