|Reviews for A New Believer|
| aliveforever83 8/10/04 . chapter 5
I lived the first 19 years and 11 months of my life in Arkansas and have now been living in Mississippi for a year and 9 days. I always say I don't have an accent, but as I was reading the 'dialect' bits, I didn't even hesitate. Guess that does mean I have an accent!
Now, on to the actual review part of my review. Once more, you're a very good writer and the only thing I can say is that the chapters are a bit short. But, that could just be an illusion because they're single spaced. *shrugs* Anyway on to the next chapter.
| aliveforever83 8/10/04 . chapter 2
Just got back from a long weekend on the coast and thought I'd check out some of your longer works. I'm really liking this one so far. You've got a really good writing stlye that makes for extremely easy reading.
| Endless Nightmares 6/17/04 . chapter 11
Hello- Great ending, too a very short chaptered story. Good luck in your next horror story, and keep up the good work.
| Endless Nightmares 6/17/04 . chapter 10
Hello- I am reviewing your work because I am a reviewest. Well, the story is almost over. You crafted a nice piece.
| Endless Nightmares 6/17/04 . chapter 9
Hello- Longest chapter yet, nice one. See, it doesn't take much to write longer chapters. Anyway, great job.
| Endless Nightmares 6/17/04 . chapter 8
Hello- I don't think I ever asked you this before, but why are your chapters so small? Is there some reason for that? I am just curious to why each story you make, its just small. I think if you just let yourself write, and give yourself time you'll be able to write more. I don't see it as an issue.
| Endless Nightmares 6/17/04 . chapter 7
Hello- well, I think the story is losing some strength. How about a really malevolent Chester, who hurts people? That would make the story much cooler.
| Endless Nightmares 6/17/04 . chapter 6
Hello- lol I think it was Chester, the ghost that doesn't exist. Nice job on the chapter.
| Endless Nightmares 6/17/04 . chapter 5
Hello- I believe in ghosts heh. I wish I could just see one.
| Endless Nightmares 6/17/04 . chapter 4
Hello- Nice job.
| Endless Nightmares 6/17/04 . chapter 3
Hello- the only thing I suggest is some graphic descriptions of things.
| Endless Nightmares 6/17/04 . chapter 2
Hello- Nice character development. We can see how much emotion each character has. Nice job.
| Endless Nightmares 6/17/04 . chapter 1
Hello Slave- short, but has a good promise.
| avanfos 6/8/04 . chapter 11
I thought the ending was great. Very spooky and cool. Didn't see the ghost wife thing coming though. Oh and I posted a response to your challenge for June, it is called Virtual Love.
| avanfos 6/8/04 . chapter 8
Its is wife isn't it? Thinking I must read the next chapter. Squirrel hunting. Heh. Too great.