Kick ** man! I love it! I have to ask a favor. If you haven't read one of my stories Razor Blade Kisses I'd like for you too. I'd love to see your opinion on it. I'm planning on having it published.

very creative! i like it, very very unique!

what sexi poem lol (i mean that in the least kinky way possible =P) and it rhymes! oh god yes! lol

Lols, definetly different...(and I thought some of my stuff was out there, this makes Sugar seem normal lols) This is good, kinda gives off one of those dominatrix vibes...I could see ya with a whip and leather singing this :P Nice job, though it should be PG-13.

Not bad, different.