As always, I love the poetry that you write. It sounds quite intellectual and not, in any way, mediocre. But this poem baffles me a bit. I understand the point of the poem, but the details are a bit foggy...
...I do have my bad reviews, too. Sorry if this is too pessimistic.
[~Shadow of Silver~]

Very nice work, here--Erica, is it?? (I read profiles often). You've got some talent.
Minor note: My favorite band is, too, Evanescence. I'm currently writing a screenplay at home based on some of the Evanescence songs. Very depressing and dark...

This is an exceptional piece wonderful use of vocabulary and a biting indictment on this way of being.
Well Done
Keep Writing
F.C

The flowing way of the words is really nice. It is a interesting poem, I like the topic.
Thanks for reviewing my poem "Need".

The title suits the poem perfectly. Good job.