| Reviews for If I Could, I Would |
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silver frog 6/22/04 . chapter 1hey fuuma!ish keisi! hah...well, great poem...darnit all you good authors... jeez...o well great job keep up the good work! i guess every1 will see you when you git bak! bai -keisiD |
Summerdazed 6/9/04 . chapter 1i think this is from heaven, gorgeous. review me if you're free! summerdazed |
Rhetorics 6/6/04 . chapter 1You know that just seems REAALY appealing during the heart of finals... Oh man, the imagery... it makes me feel like I'm really there. I love autumn imagery... I wrote an entire fic in the timeframe of autumn, because autumn is the best... *Sigh* I lost it... I can no longer tell what's real and what's not. Great poem, nice attempt at the vocab, and keep up the good work! |
silverdream139 6/3/04 . chapter 1Asfldkjds! :D ES PRETTEH. Agreed with Tree, last line is TOTALLY a fetish...meh...and autumn leaves hold so many meanings...I love how you make this personal. Wonderful, again. -Arii ._o P.S. Conflagration! SQUEE! |
Tree 5/30/04 . chapter 1 I'm in love with this one, haha pretty much like everything else you've written. In love with it all. Fetish with the last line. Great work! -Cindy Moon *) |