this is beautiful wording, just beautiful. I can relate to this one as well, I know the feeling far too well. Keep writing

... *sigh*... ya... 't's the plain truth that that is... when one becomes subject to lonliness... one never noe's what'll come next... if to put on a smile is to lie, then are we not all lieing... not only to others, but ourselves? do we not tear ourselves up for the whole in our hearts? Do we not wep over the ones missing from our souls?...
eh... ignore me... i'm in a angsty moo, so best chanvces are that none of that made ne sense what so ever,

yup... know exactly how u feel... and awesome poem! Ithink u alreat know this, but i'm not saying this just cuz we're friends, but b/c i truely think its an awesome poem!

very nice...very sad 2...

Wow. I can seriously relate to this. :) Cool!
Keep up the great work!
-Anna.

A truly beautiful poem. I love it!