WOW! That was an amazing story! *.* wow...thats about all I can say is WOW! haha great job...your stories are always so awesome!

Tara a.k.a. Taco

Oh! chapter 19 is up of feuer, wasser, luft, erde is up! XD

Great story, although I enjoyed Tarot Cards a lot more. You are a great writer.

So that's it? lol. It was a good ending episode, but I was sad that Danielle died ='( I enjoyed it though, lol). But I knew that as soon as Alana and Deacon were the only ones still alive that they would end up together in the end... I'm not sure if that was just a lucky guess or if I watch too much television and it has brainwashed me hehe =P. Well, great job and I look forward to reading more of your works.

It was a good finish and I'm glad you're finally free of this story-lol. Yeah, there were a lot of mistakes but I knew what you meant, plus I know how it is when u don't feel like proofreading. Anywayz, I'm glad Alana didn't die and you didn't stick to your original order of deaths. Good job.

I can't believe Gerald is dead; I did not expect that to happen at all. At least Alana is still alive; and I'm glad she jacked Danielle up. This episode wasn't really that sad to me jus cuz I never really noticed Gerald...he was jus kinda there (to me at least) but this was a good chapter. Later,
David

YAY GERALD IS DEAD! lol, aren't I sweet and innocent? But yeah, I don't mind him dying, he liked to play around with people's emotions. If Alana stops being a ** to Danielle, I might grow to like her now... Good work once again, can't wait for the next chapter.

Lol, I'm laughing at Alana. I have to admit Gerald is kinda... Unloyal... But I hate Alana so it's all good hehe. I didn't expect Raquel to die... But she was getting annoying so it's not all that bad. Good work once again and I'll be back once you've updated this story (or Tarot Cards lol)

Lol, I'm glad Danielle is still alive =P. I don't really care that Kinon is dead. Gr... I hope Alana dies, but seeing as she's the **, she probably won't (lol). *cries*. Once again, good work. I'm gonna read the next one now... YAY I'LL BE ALL CAUGHT UP =D

The next day...
I'm back again! Hehe I wanted to read more =P. I hope Danielle doesn't die lol. If Kinon dies, I really don't care. Good chapter though, it's ok that it's short. I'm gonna read the next chapter now. Whoot, I'm catching up! YAY!

Lol you wanted everyone to see Foxx die? I have no problem with that! Haha I'm a bit sad that he's gone, but he wasn't really that great if ya know what I mean... *prays that Alana dies and Danielle lives* lol. Good work, this is the third time that I've come back today to read a chapter lol. Be back soon!

I liked this (as usual!). The plot is good so far, I'm enjoying it. I hate Alana lol she's such a **. I like Danielle much better. God, Alana is so fricken full of herself it makes me wanna rip my hair out hehe =P. I'll read more soon.

lol I like Valca, though I'm not sure how to explain why. Alana kind of ** me off a bit there, spiteful little ** (hehe). I'll read the next chapter soon. Good work once again. And if Alana dies, I'll be overjoyed (lol, aren't I compassionate? =P)

I liked this yes I did... I wanted to continue reading th8is sooner, but I've been doing so much writing myself lately that its been hectic to do anything...
So, on to your writing lol. *shivers* That creeper guy freaks me out (Yes, isn't my vocabulary advanced? =P). Lol, I actually don't care that Esten's dead lol. No, I'm not spiteful at all *shifty eyes*. Good work.
Well, I'll come back to read more when I have more time. I like this story, and I wanna see where it goes.

Raquel is dead...I didn't expect that at all. I hope Danielle dies next, and then Gerald! How could he do that to Alana? I hope Alana beats Danielle down and then EVE comes and eats her. Anywayz, Allen is getting on my nerves and Danielle is a sneaky little b!tch stealing Alana's man I don't like her anymore. Raquel was extremely slow in this episode&you need to update soon cuz I wanna see whatz gonna happen. -David

Yeah, you are a little rusty *J/K*. It was good like usual: Why did Eve kill Kinon? He didn't go into the temple. That was funny w/Alana and the professor "Oh! Scary Wall!" Kinon was crazy, but I don't think I'm really going to miss him. I'm glad Danielle got away; she used to bug me but now I like her more for sum reason. Anywayz, Allen needs to be slapped. Thatz it for my character evaluation: update soon,
David