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| artificial destiny 2008-02-17 ch 24,  | abusesighh* great ending. sad and happy and... AHH great story |
| artificial destiny 2008-02-17 ch 9, | abuseLOL. love it! |
| CrimsonSentry 2007-07-15 ch 21, | abuseLink screamed! Lol, that's funny. Anyway at times the story does get kind of confusing, but as i read onwards, i get what your going on about. I don't know if that's the effect you wanted on your readers but. If it isn't let me know and i'll go back and find them. |
| CrimsonSentry 2007-07-14 ch 7, | abuseI;m confused. Where are they when they see that painting? And whose Mike? He's not related to her is he? |
| CrimsonSentry 2007-07-14 ch 6, | abuseI dont't know what to think. I really did think he was gonna turn into some beast. Oh well. Your a very good writer by the way. You have a funny way with words. |
| CrimsonSentry 2007-07-14 ch 4, | abuseOh, so cute! But since this ismeant to be a horror story, i don't think its gonna stay cute for long. |
| CrimsonSentry 2007-07-14 ch 3, | abuseArghh! Where do you get you idea's from ? Where eva they com efrom , there totally cool:) |
| CrimsonSentry 2007-07-14 ch 1, | abuseWow. Love the intro. Creepy. |
| toxic-noodle725 2007-06-24 ch 24, anon. | abusethat was a very creative version of the fairy tale. really it was. i was impressed. |
| Vanessa atalanta 2006-07-19 ch 5, anon. | abuseWow! I love this. It would be perfect if it wasn't for my cat, who keeps insisting on licking my face, her breath isn't all that fetching. |
| Aneedeorarose 2006-07-04 ch 15, anon. | abuseI am really enjoying story.. you've used a ouiji board? wow you're brave! what happened? |
| ItalianQT 2006-04-05 ch 25, | abuseGood story! You used the Beauty and the Beast story in an unique way! : ) |
| Readers 2006-01-18 ch 2, | abuseCongratulations! This fic has been nominated for the Best Romance Fiction of 2005. The voting began yesterday and will go on till March 15th. Please inform your readers in your next update to visit my profile. Thank You. |
| Under the Stars 2005-12-23 ch 25, | abusei had just finished reading your other story, mystery of the night, and then i decided to read this one and you can do wonders with a plot. i was pushed and pulled this way and that, going cold and turning warm, constantly going back between the two guys and mona and... it was good. one thing that i was curious about, however, was the ouija board. and how you said you don't suggest trying it and how it changes you. does it really? i used to do it occasionally with one of my old friends whom i no longer talk to, and it could just be the fact that it was so long ago and i was so young i didn't recognize any significant changes, but i was wondering about your opinion on that. and about that animal comment you made about it as well. i'm not sure if you get email notifications when you get a new review, but if you do and are reading this, i'm actually very interested in what you have to say. so if you want, feel free to email me back at underthe_covers@hotmail.com |
| Sidereus Phoenix 2005-11-27 ch 2, | abuseHi, in this chapter you said "I know that you will [find] my company 'exhilarating' due to your masochist attitude. However, I feel the urge to remind you that I am not a sadist." I just wanted to let you know that you have the masochist/sadist thing backwards. A masochist is someone who derives pleasure, especially sexual pleasure, and a sadist is someone who derives pleasure from hurting others. The wording of the snetance also seems a bit awkward and might read better if you changed the wording around to say for example. " I know you find my company 'exhilarating' due to your sadistic tendancies. However, I would like to remind you that I am by no means masochistic." Again maybe not exactly what you were thinking but removal of some words and what not makes the line less stiff.Keep up the work.Cheers, Sidereus Phoenix |