|Reviews for Midnight|
| shaedowe 5/31/04 . chapter 1
interesting stuff you can write about midnight. I like all three lines, but i agree with Les Yeux Violets. Minus the 'but'.
| godawful teen-angst poetry 5/31/04 . chapter 1
Remove the commas and the "but" and this will be so much better.
| twilightwriter07 5/30/04 . chapter 1
Nice haiku here. I love the imagery here. Keep up the good work.
| i am classic 5/30/04 . chapter 1
i like things like this.
I like haikus. I like the last line alot.