OMFG. i really like this. it was an excellent story, short, sweet ( in a weird way) , and very good. great job!

omfg that is awesome. i love how it is written. omfg. it is so good, it leaves this chill, this eerie feeling. it is really good.

I THINK THAT THIS STORY OF TERROR AND EXCITEMENT IS A GREAT ONE. I HAVE MET THIS GIRL OF WHOM WROTE IT AND SHE DESERVES AN AWARD FOR HER WORK.

Totally Awesome Katrina! :) Kickass! :)

Woah. Reminiscent of Poe's "Tell Tale Heart" there. Makes me want to read Cask of Amontillado again, as that's one of my favorite stories.
The third chapter was amazing. I love the details, the character...and it's chilling, especially for me, and probably for a lot of people.
Just...Woah.

Beautifully twisted, I loved it. And you wrote it so quickly. It's great when you get on a roll like that ain't it. It's also very refreshing to see a piece of work with so few errors and a pace so fast that the reader hardly notices them. Great story, I can't wait to see the next one, keep writing.
**Slave**
PS. Thanks for the kind review of "The Toe Monster".

Awesome! Your description is beautiful without being overdone. I loved the imagery, I loved everything! This goes into my favorites.
Incredible job, keep writing.
**Slave**

Woah.
Just like...Woah. Katrina, that is AWESOME.
I hope you write a lot more to go along with this. Or ELSE, damnit.