very well done, very interesting thoughts on death and heaven here, i especially liked the bit about jesus running up, very cool and original. Nice work-Keith Andrew

This is so sad. By the way, I love your name, LOTR rocks! Thanks for your review on my poem, I Am Not Alone.

Nice poem.
It flows very well and the development in it, is very good. And a well-chosen title also (this is often a problem, I think).

this is a really great poem.

Very well written, flows very well and creates a very good image in your mind. You get the feeling that maybe this it's what it's like. It's interesting to see death from the other side, without being extremely mornful and saddening. Great work.

i really like it!!

This is really cool. I love the thought of heaven and being carlessly happy and free...you have taken that thought to new level. Thanks.
P.S. Thanks for the review. You reviewed my poem 'The Devil' and I just wanted to clear some things up. I know the bible says the devil's place is full of fire and that's how i have always imagined it but i thought it would give it a new twist. And I definately know that the devil isn't as powerful as God, I just wanted to give that scary effect and make him sound cocky about himself. If you have time you should read that part in my profile that says: READ THIS BIT BELOW – IT IS IMPORTANT. It explains what I'm trying to say in more detail. I'm so sorry. I've raved on again haven't I? I have a tandancy to do that. Sorry. Anyway, thanks for the review and I love your poem.

This is EXCELLENT! great topic, visuals, AND rhythm!

that is cool, very musical. You have talent!

Hi! Wow, this is an amazing poem. I love the way you used the joy of going to heaven to contrast with the family's grief. Great imagery!

Wow. Great job! and thanks for the reviews :)

Awesome poem! The words fit the meaning perfectly!

You have talent! ^_^ to write about death and to keep it both real and optimistic is a talent, and I say that even though I have a positive outlook on death, too. The difference is, I can't write about it well ^_^'. The rhyming's nice, too!

Wow. I got your user-ID from a review you left on one of my pieces, so I decided to check your writing out... this poem is amazing. I almost cried. Keep writing! You're so good!

Hey, this is a great poem! This is the first spiritual poem I've read on this site. I gotta say, being a Christian myself, I think this poem is very very good.