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| jayc3218 2008-08-07 ch 8,  | abuseOMG i love the story is so good please update ! |
| Fleeting Moment 2007-09-27 ch 8, | abuseTHis is awsome UPDATE! |
| BrownEyedBeauty 2005-12-11 ch 8, | abuseWow. What a great story! Good Luck and update soon! plz, plz, plz! |
| bex17 2005-11-23 ch 8, | abuseCongrats for moving back to third person, but you didn't have to! I hate being an ** and correcting people. Even though it was only constructive...Anyway, good chapter! And happy thanksgiving, if you live in the U.S... |
| First to Never Know 2005-11-11 ch 8, | abusePlease update soon. I like the story. My boyfriend would love knowing I liked something that had to do with the Yankees. ;) |
| Deafgurl's world 2005-11-01 ch 8, | abuseHey!Wow!Rafferty and Blake engaged now. How strange that Blake is so quiet person. I wonder if Rafferty like him or not? Hurry update soon. |
| yarrowicefrost 2005-10-31 ch 8, | abuseWOW =D nice story! cant wait to read more! |
| B.Laures 2005-10-30 ch 8, | abuseI hope you update soon; this is a really good story! |
| bex17 2005-10-30 ch 7, | abuseThis is really good! You HAVE to keep on writing this! okay...bye! Oh, and by the way...You switched from third person to Rafferty's POV. |
| zenni 2005-04-12 ch 7, | abusewow- good story. Please update soon |
| city-gal7 2005-04-04 ch 7, | abuseur story is cool. I jsut think that you shouldn't have it too cliched you know? i like cliche's but make it as if its not too predictable! and i just thought that she forgave him too easily. Maybe at least be sarcastic...okay, a LOT saracastic to him before finally forgiving him? just an opinion. Nothing else, except update! |
| dragon girl 2005-04-03 ch 7, anon. | abusemore more more more more more more.more. (sorry, i have no constructive scolding) |
| CoOkIe MoNsTeR 2005-03-31 ch 7, anon. | abuse*does a happy dance* you updated!! yes! *choir singing hallelha* i spelt that wrong, but i dont care. You updated! i'm glad she gave him a chance, he desereved one after all. I just hope that he doesn't go back to being a jerk |
| bluang3lbby 2005-03-30 ch 7, | abusekeep writin. i really want to see how this will end up. |
| bite~my~ass 2005-03-30 ch 7, anon. | abusei really didn't like how Blake was all nice to her immediatley. but then he changed in the car right? so its all good. Hm...wonder what's gonna happen at the base ball field place |