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Reviews For: The Hopeless Haunting

Teacup Majoram
2004-05-31
ch 1,
abuseNicely written. Good job! ^_^
lronMaiden
2004-05-31
ch 1,
abusethat's such a great poem - i loved it and will put it in my faves. It's pretty much flawless except for one typo where you wrote 'refugee' instead of 'refuge'.
i love dark poems, i've written a few, but i dont think i can match up. you have an excellent, original style and it flows smoothly.
review me if you get the time please. And if you want of course..hehehe
this is my love for you
2004-05-31
ch 1,
abuseSo... brooding. Great use of metaphors. Good work!
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