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| Teacup Majoram 2004-05-31 ch 1, | abuseNicely written. Good job! ^_^ |
| lronMaiden 2004-05-31 ch 1, | abusethat's such a great poem - i loved it and will put it in my faves. It's pretty much flawless except for one typo where you wrote 'refugee' instead of 'refuge'. i love dark poems, i've written a few, but i dont think i can match up. you have an excellent, original style and it flows smoothly. review me if you get the time please. And if you want of course..hehehe |
| this is my love for you 2004-05-31 ch 1, | abuseSo... brooding. Great use of metaphors. Good work! |