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| Munchausen by Proxy 2004-06-17 ch 1,  | abuseOoh, moving! It gave a different view on suicide, and spread a seperate light. Yes, very different. It was strange that Michael felt so neglected but never said a word, and also that he, in a way, blamed the country. Ah, oh well. Lovely and moving, I'm going to remember this one. |
| vanburen 2004-06-06 ch 1, | abuseThis really moved me. It is a fine piece of work. There were a few problems with grammar and spelling, but those are easily fixed. Also, it might help a little if you identify when Michael has moved to another location, sometimes it is confusing. For example, when he is all of a sudden at the desk at school, I thought "huh? I thought he was in a car?" But other than that, this is a well done piece of writing and you should be proud of it. p.s. thank you for your lovely reviews |
| Eagle Seance 2004-06-01 ch 1, | abuseI haven't seen the movie, but this is really beautiful. I've got lost in the rain once, so i was nodding the whole way through. Promptly spoken! Keep writing! |