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| BlytheBee 2004-07-15 ch 1,  | abuseI like the amusing characters very much, as well as the general plot. The lines, however, read like limmericks (which have five lines) and some of the stanzas do not complete the flow of the limmerick. Sometimes the beats were excellent while in other spots they were a bit weaker. Nevertheless, fun poem! |
| Ultimate Schuyler 2004-07-05 ch 1, | abuse^_^ This was so great! One of the BEST rhyming poems I have ever read on Fictionpress... truly great. However, "thimble" and "shamble" was a bit off... time to crack out the thesauraus! ^_^ Also, responding to your review of "Butterfly Wings": No, I don't usually write romance -- well, I do, but as this haiku was a personal one, it made it sort of... embarrassing... *blushes* It was written to remind me of a person that I care about, whom I was too shy to dedicate the poem to. *blushes again* Yeah. So, anyway. AWESOME POEM! ^_^ lol |