Reviews for We Will Not Be the Sun

elfmaid 2005-08-08 ch 1,	Great work here. I love villanelles, and I love the idea behind this one. Keep it up. =)
ladylore 2004-07-05 ch 1,	Brilliant! I loved it.
Usuckass13 2004-06-22 ch 1,	That's kind of confusing.
Star of the Morning 2004-06-06 ch 1,	you know, I got up this morning. I meant to ask you to pass the butter, but instead I said, "You ! You've ruined my life!" Seriously though. Form poetry is hardcore, andwow. Yours is some seriously impressive , darling. he. Keep on rockin in the free world.
Willow Elandria 2004-05-31 ch 1,	Excellent villanelle! Heh, makes mine look horrible... thanks a lot. sniff Wonderful imagery... and I definitely think there's meaning in it. One tiny little thing: you repeat "end" in both your A1 and A2 lines... this sounds fine at first, but in the last stanza seems a little too repetitive. Otherwise, perfect.