Jenny~I didn't know that cats and fleas could have so much meaning. But hey, you wrote it! I think that you are such a great writer! I envy your talents...Don't worry, I won't push you off a tree:)
~Daisy aka PinkyCD

Wow! Really good, I like how you portrayed yourself into such a common animal. Even though it is a symbolistic poem, I think even small children would like it! I really enjpyed reading it over and over again because i can just see a cat sitting on a ledge in the bright sunlight and adding all the things you said!
well done,
MDND