Loved the rhymes, they seemed to fit very well, if not perfectly. Great work, again! Keep it up!

~Lidless Eye

Ah, that was lovely. The rhyme scheme made it choppy, I'd say, but I'd be a liar if I said I didn't enjoy it. Beautiful work.

Beautiful! I really like the flow of this piece - its really catchy ^_^ Great topic, you've really added great humor to this!
~ CoolBeans18s