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| Sage Valkisco 2004-08-15 ch 1,  | abuseo...lovely...like sweet nectar... |
| Joewhatever 2004-07-24 ch 1, | abuseWow. Interesting, and emotional. I love it. Great job. |
| Eirien 2004-07-24 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful and powerful. Creates a very romantic, dark and mysterious atmosphere, reminds me a bit of William Blake. The last lines are a great climax. I think my favourite lines are the ones you quote in the summary, if I understand them correctly they draw a parallel between writing poetry and cutting, a connection I have expressed in some of my poems as well. |
| blackrosestears 2004-07-17 ch 1, | abusevery nice. Creates a beautiful picture. |
| MySweetPrince 2004-07-16 ch 1, | abusevery nicely written. Keep up the good work. |
| Blackening the Ivy 2004-07-15 ch 1, | abusesimply awesome. |
| Aslan Israel 2004-06-17 ch 1, | abuseThat was so beautiful. Every line had me captivated. Awesome poem. You are truely gifted. |
| Dancinggal5389 2004-06-13 ch 1, | abuseEven though this is somewhat hard to understand, the language is AMAZING. You are not just a poetess, you are a word-weaver |
| Embryonic Love 2004-06-01 ch 1, | abuseWOW! i read your review and decided to check some of your stuff out...this is incredible! |
| revertedautumn 2004-06-01 ch 1, | abusebeautiful. i really liked it. it moved me a bit... that's hard to do so congrats. |
| SephoraEyes 2004-06-01 ch 1, | abuseThat was incredible, imagery and diction, you name it. Nice job |
| AmethystPisces 2004-05-31 ch 1, | abuseThis is amazing. It flows beautifully and conveys a great deal of emotion. I can not pick one line that I liked the best. Very beautiful and haunting piece. |