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Reviews For: Imprisonment of the mind

LifeMystery
2004-06-20
ch 1,
Your poems are beautiful! Your words are well chosen and give depth to the poem.
broken shard of twilight
2004-06-10
ch 1,
The best line of this poem is by far, "Freedom is our destroyer and our creator/Our definer and our corrupter". Incredibly well-done. The oxymorons are a very well-written and you seem to have a knack for them. The poem is very deep and it makes sense. Oftentimes those do not quite go hand in hand. :) Good poem, wonderfully done.
Pearls and twilight,
Kelly
Crusty-Diamonds
2004-06-06
ch 1,
Although I don't agree with some of the idea's I still found it well written. I love the line "Freedom is our destroyer and our creator,
our definer and our corrupter" ugh I'm tired sorry for the crappy (not very long) review I'm kind of dead right now lol.
Pothe
2004-06-02
ch 1,
its an interesting poem, you chose your words nicely, though it seems too sporatic of a jump from power and emotions to the desolate solitary path of our lives, and as you seem to mention, the end we fear yet moves so far...if that really makes sense..which I am not known to make.
Cyanide Sunday
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