I like it. Simple words, simple format. Perfect for it.
keep writing-
til-iburnout

that was an absolutly wonderful piece of work! i love the way you leave "wrong" and "alone" one thier own line. really adds impact. i love this! such a wonderful poem, so strong with so few words.

So short, yet the point is very clearly shown. Getting a short poem to protray such a powerful message is difficult, but you do very well. Nice work!