|Reviews for Wrong|
| til-iburnout aka Amanda Helton 6/3/04 . chapter 1
I like it. Simple words, simple format. Perfect for it.
| Cry Tears of Darkness 6/1/04 . chapter 1
that was an absolutly wonderful piece of work! i love the way you leave "wrong" and "alone" one thier own line. really adds impact. i love this! such a wonderful poem, so strong with so few words.
| Steel Winged Angel 6/1/04 . chapter 1
So short, yet the point is very clearly shown. Getting a short poem to protray such a powerful message is difficult, but you do very well. Nice work!