This is really beautiful. Being an art major I should know, I've told many of my friends at school about this poem of yours and we all agree that this is exacty how we all feel inside when we do our art. Because after all, it doesn't matter what form of art you do, you, yourself, is always refected in your work.

You just paint a picture with your words, so damn vivid! Long live the Mistress of Imagery! I love the whole piece, love the colors and images and (Oh wow I think I may have an idea from your poem...oh wow an idea! Maybe I can write it...can't seem to finish anything lately.) Good job, I love this one.

I wonder if you're right. I think you are. It's good of you to put this in perspective for me. Personally, I spell "colors" as "colours" but I'm not sure if they're both right. my english could be better. Sorry. I really do like it. This is very cute. Great job.
jake

That's so deep...wow...I'm speechless...seriously...

very pretty with strong a strong philosophical stance in your ending.

again, same thing about dont judge a book by it's cover. i completely agree. you should publish ur poems

very nice as well. all your work is. :D