*sniffles* Okay then -_-I just printed this one and Bree's out for use as book marks...Both of them still make me cry somehow... I know exactly how you feel, and Bree as well... *snif* k. So, you spelled "lose" as "loose" twice, you dork... and I think you meant to say "to the bottom of my heart" not "t the bottom fo my heart"... but yeah. Good stuff.

I really like this one! There's a few lines in particular that i think are super- like the one that says the word "miss" can't descibe utter lonliness. Muy bien. I might check out the varying line lengths and how they affect the rhythm. I'd also go back and fix the typos, i noticed a few, but otherwise i like this alot! :)

i really like this...its very well written...i really like the format... if you have a second check out my "because of you"..its about some different stuff but its written in a similar format...leave me some feedback?