aw man that's so freaking sad. wow btw i am crying haha!! i'm a mush anywho. wow you're a really good writer and i'll read some of your other stuff later. i was just randomly picking stuff and this was the one i got from your list. well have fun writing!!

aw, that was such a sad ending... :( but i dun think they went to hell ^-^

Ahh... What a horrid ending. ;_; But it was a good story. Nicely done.

Fear drives all things.

wow! very very powerful! check out my stories sometime. you're a pretty amazing writer