Smooth work, damned pity it was left to die by all appearances.

Nice setup for the story - you've crafted a neat political system that I can only envy. :-)

Please update!

Very interesting and well written. One question though - is it going to be finished?

Nice work! If you're reading this, add another sodding chapter, please!

hmm. interesting chapter. I like how you constructed the politics of the assembled government. nice job. update soon.

Discriptive and gripping. Update soon. And "soon" means sometime before next year...heh heh.

Well, snap. Sounds like someone's about to unleash mightily. I hope you plan on continuing this; I see you haven't updated in a while.

~He Who Walks On All Fours

interesting so far, ill keep reading for sure.
(by the way, on your profile Rolnald emmerich just added "the day after tomorrow" to his list of movies"

Hm...the same, and yet different—probably 'cause of the political dimension. I am entertained and intrigued; please continue.

Good beginning to a sci-fi technothriller. How long between updates on this one? (Like I should talk about expedient updates).

Great sci-fi story and the best part was the explanation of the interplanetary politics. Very life like, very realistic. It reads like something Tom Clancy would write if he were to write a sci fi story. Is this going to be a short story or is it going to be closer to a novel? At this point it looks like it could go either way. Excellent character building as well. Keep working on this one, I want to read more.
Calvin Fitzgerald

Great beginning update soon please please r&r my story too http://w.fictionpress.com/read.php?storyid=715203

oh. very nice cliffhanger. good story. update soon.