|Reviews for Endgame|
| Nathan 1/5/08 . chapter 2
Smooth work, damned pity it was left to die by all appearances.
| KimHua 3/14/07 . chapter 1
Nice setup for the story - you've crafted a neat political system that I can only envy. :-)
| averroes 6/12/05 . chapter 2
Very interesting and well written. One question though - is it going to be finished?
| Saint Josmane 4/21/05 . chapter 2
Nice work! If you're reading this, add another sodding chapter, please!
| biminator 10/9/04 . chapter 2
hmm. interesting chapter. I like how you constructed the politics of the assembled government. nice job. update soon.
| RCS 10/7/04 . chapter 2
Discriptive and gripping. Update soon. And "soon" means sometime before next year...heh heh.
| Mbwun 7/8/04 . chapter 1
Well, snap. Sounds like someone's about to unleash mightily. I hope you plan on continuing this; I see you haven't updated in a while.
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| KyranHayyt 6/23/04 . chapter 1
interesting so far, ill keep reading for sure.
(by the way, on your profile Rolnald emmerich just added "the day after tomorrow" to his list of movies"
| CommandoCody 6/10/04 . chapter 1
Hm...the same, and yet different—probably 'cause of the political dimension. I am entertained and intrigued; please continue.
| RCS 6/7/04 . chapter 1
Good beginning to a sci-fi technothriller. How long between updates on this one? (Like I should talk about expedient updates).
| Calvin Fitzgerald 6/2/04 . chapter 1
Great sci-fi story and the best part was the explanation of the interplanetary politics. Very life like, very realistic. It reads like something Tom Clancy would write if he were to write a sci fi story. Is this going to be a short story or is it going to be closer to a novel? At this point it looks like it could go either way. Excellent character building as well. Keep working on this one, I want to read more.
| sieg45 6/1/04 . chapter 1
Great beginning update soon please please r&r my story too . ?storyid715203
| biminator 6/1/04 . chapter 1
oh. very nice cliffhanger. good story. update soon.