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| blak pearl 2004-08-03 ch 1,   | hey! it is ME! (the girl with the gay story...lol) interesting first chapter! uve gotta update soon... im most intrigued... it reminds me of the movie 'i am sam' i hvnt seen it but ive heard heaps about it off my friends...and its so sad! sorry if this is a weird q, but rnt ppl hu r retarded hav retarded kids? jus wonderin... mayb not always... anyway its a gr8 start, and im really wondering where the story is heading... update soon! blak_pearl ps i read anothr of ur stories- the first time! it was really sweet! kai is such a sweetie, and so is kara (u like k names, dont ya?) anyway it was really good! |
| Amber Hill 2004-06-02 ch 1, | what is this, what is this? you're obviously having lots of inspiration at this point of time, because this is another magnificent piece of writing you've produced. i can't wait to see where you'll take this. |
| Anglachel67 2004-06-01 ch 1, | That was beautiful. It made me want to cry, and usually I don't cry when reading, just when I watch movies. |
| cookiemonster 2004-06-01 ch 1, | its a little unclear at parts but you built up a growing suspicion of what everything really si, and I guess that was the point. Good job! Henna |