Yo bro this is an incredible story. I reviewed it once before but for some odd reason I never came back to it. I was just going through my review histroy and I found this story. It is beyond incredible and I am praying that you will decide to write more.
Honestly this is a great story, and if you can please continue writing it I can gurantee you at least one review per chapter. (more people will come once they read the story) But yeah it is the second best vampire story I have read.
Also in a couple of days I am planning on putting up my own vampire story that I would appericate if you would review.
Later,
JK

Beautifully written. The best, most well-researched vampire story I've read. Keep up the good work!

This reads like a letter. You just say stuff. No action going on, really. It was enjoyable in the end, but hard to get through.

Beautifully written. I love it.

Calm down Josh. You are doing a nice job and don’t need any reviews to suggest that. ^.^

I like where you're taking the story so far...keep writing, please!

Loving the story. It caught my interest and my facination with vampires. I love your twist to tradition. Please continue with your great tale.

Ill keep reading if you keep writing

I really like this story and I can't wait for more. Your characters and subject matter is very inflammitory which rocks. Good luck.