good poem but watch out for the rednecks they might flame ya -curls up in fetal position and trembles with fear- lol keep writing

I see a lot of truth in this. I really do.
America is young yet, an infant among nations. Statistically, it's the third youngest in the world, beat out only by Australia and Taiwan.
From a sharer of thought
-Renne

Hmm approve of the expressing yourself thing but really don't like the message. I mean, I don't get how people that live here can bash the country, it's way better than any other country out there. It's not perfect but I'd rather live here and have choices and a good life than be anywhere else. I like that young people are thinking but I can't agree with it, not wholeheartedly.

strong message and, i think, a very unique style. i like it :)

that was really excellent!

yes, we live as the Romans!

nice. Good message

that's really good. and really true too. watch out for any cia agents that may try and track you down. ;p

Excellent, excellent poem. I love the way that you used Pledge of Allegience to make a point... You definately made the point.

very nice :D