A very interesting chapter to say the least. I like your style of writing. Keep up the good work.
BingCherryGirl

I like the way you're going with this story. It really makes me wonder where you're going to go with this. Maybe make the chapters longer and put more detail into you're writing. A little adjetives never hurt anything. :-)
BingCherryGirl

I love what you did with the tattoos! very artistic and different! And the angel is very nice twist! Keep it up!

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recalcitrant

awsomeawsome! i luv ur writings. update soon plz!