waiting can hurt more than anything else

Wow, that's so beautiful! You have such talent. It's really, really good, I have not yet attempted to write about something so deep as love, but you seem comfortable with expressing the pains of unrequited love.
Excellent job!
Happy writing.
..::Jewel::..

wow. i can feel his hope and despair and just overwhelming emotion pouring out of that :D i love it. you are now on my author favourites list haha

Touching and beautifully written. Lucky girl whoever she is! : )

wow. that was very good. i realy enjoyed it.
aurora

very nice yet again