 Gurt Rude Malanos 2004-08-13 . chapter 1Really Good Haiku! Liked the rhyme 2. I added a new chapter to The Great Breakout From New Covonant. Could u please read & Review. Thanks! |
 Endless Nightmares 2004-06-17 . chapter 1Hello- Nice haiku. Yes, and like the commerical says " Diamonds are forever" |
 Franken 2004-06-07 . chapter 1Nice description here, kind of strange that you decided to rhyme it though... or actually, it sort of sounds like you didn't mean to, that it just sort of fell into place like that... good job though!
--Franken-- |
 PC 2004-06-05 . chapter 1 GOOD! It even rhymed:) |
 Eirien 2004-06-02 . chapter 1Nice. Can be seen symbolically as well, poeple can read all kinds of meanings into it. Or for instance contrast the everlasting life of a diamlond with the mutability of other parts of creation - man for instance.
Lovely little gem in itself, your poem. ;-) |