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| vanburen 2004-06-06 ch 1,  | abuseA nice short story, but be careful not to rush your plot, and mind your spellilng. Good work. |
| mizu no kokoro 2004-06-04 ch 1, | abuseAW... great short story~~ I liked the characters, they seemed so real~ |