Wow so glad i found this. I know exactly how you feel, there's this guy i know who acts exactly the same way. And then when a girl does break up with him he gets all depressed and shit, looking for sympathy or something. Well, good job on all these.

nice use of language there.. lol.. very nice description of a player

wow i really really raelly really really really like this

lol... ive felt that way more than once... its so incredibkly true.. and I do like that ending!

Sorry for not reviewing lately! But this is just amazing. Amazing amazing. Amazingly amazing. I love it.

it's simple, emotional, and totally relateable. heh.. think everyone has gone through this stage in his/her life at least once.

wow,... very intense.. I liek the format and I can relate... how do you do those idents!

Wow. These are some powerful emotions, but I kinda know how you feel.
Lor

this is really good babe! wo's it for? the mention of duck tape made me think of a friend!lol. ttyl!
**Candi**

I love this to the ends of the univers. It's so emotional. Props. I love the repitition in this poem. it blows most poems away. Do make this a collection. I really like it.
Jake ( the shinji boi)

WOW! such a run of emotion!
I like the way it flowed in absoulute bitterness. excellent excellent

Wow, this reminds me a lot of my friends relationship. Weird.
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Anyways, I never said Paganism was a cheap knock-off, I simply said that it was so much alike. And the same God of Christianity, the Jewish God Jehova Yahweh, existed before Kahli.
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And I already knew that the Christmas tree, wreath and stuff like that came from Paganism. When you're a Christian, you tend to know what's Christian and what's not.
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And I got your point. Besides which, very few Christian branches actually do pagan practices anymore. The few that do are anything with icons, like the Catholic Rosary or Prayer Beads.
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I know about Paganism and I know about Christianity. *smiles* All I said was that it was close enough to be considered blasphemy, which is true. I'm not saying it is, since it's not Christian Paganism _isn't_ blasphemic, but I was just explaining why Christians are unnerved by Witches. That's all.
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Trying to spread understanding, not hostility.
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And to once again comment on your work, I liked it. It had a sound structure and a topic I can relate to.
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9/10

I liek it.. I can relate to some of it... but not all of it... nicely done though... nice repition

I can relate to this. It's really good. You chose just the right words, and it completely expresses your emotion. Keep it up!
Lor