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| epiphanies 2004-06-06 ch 1,  | abuseThis is so pretty. I adore it. I also adore the review you gave me, sweetheart, it was lovely. Thank you so much. It made my day, made me smile. I'm going to have a rough one tomorrow, so I'll just think about that review and get through it. Once again, thank you. You're very talented. |
| MaHaLLz 2004-06-06 ch 1, | abusei hardly have anything to say about this, yet there is alot to think about. keep writing! holla atcha girl-SweetPinay04 |
| breakme 2004-06-05 ch 1, | abuseVery beautiful. The structure and flow of the poem is just great. The repitition adds a nice effect. Wonderful imagery on the lines "Come dance with me Through the cobbled streets Come gaze with me At the miles and miles of empty skylight" |
| Innocence In Deep Water 2004-06-03 ch 1, | abusethat was beautiful, i really enjoyed it. i love how you wrote it. |
| Non-existent Puritanism 2004-06-02 ch 1, | abuseI like the repetition of the third stanza...made it seem slightly song-sish...nice one...captured the mood well... |
| t0mh4nk5 2004-06-02 ch 1, | abuseOMG! its so beautiful!! =D i love it...wow..i love the 3rd stanza for some reason...heh. great job |