|Reviews for shadow games|
| Forgotten Lore 1/23/05 . chapter 1
Hey, I found this poem because it has the same title as one of my poem. I particularly enjoyed the references to the shadows. However some of the lines seem a bit ambiguous, such as:
"My body stilled bruised form the stares I was given."
I would reccomend that you proofread a little more before posting, but other than that, keep writing your best )Sincerely,Forgotten Lore
| Fairy in Black and White 6/6/04 . chapter 1
O, I like this. Dark, angsty. My kinda stuff! I love the line "My body still bruised from the stares I was given". Awesome poem.
| JoseJavi 6/2/04 . chapter 1
i really liked it, its original. im looking forward to reading more of your it up...