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Stefen 2004-11-30 ch 2,	abuseCool, cool, cool! yayness! This is really good. Update!
I am no longer writing 2004-09-19 ch 2,	abusehehehe... i love you and your sister's writings... ^^
Germaine Amundsen 2004-07-24 ch 1,	abuseAlright dear, I'll admit I haven't actually read this, but... I always try to help out fellow writers. There's just a few things I wanted to point out-first, if there's anything about a story that's not yours (aside from using brand-names and the like, of course) then it belongs on ffn, not here. Second, in the summary you said that no lie can last indefinitely. Well, that could work, but... indefinite is just something vague or non-specific, not necessarily forever, you know? I just wanted to suggest that maybe you should change that to a more accurate word. Well-written summaries always give the reader more confidence in your writing abilities. Kisses!
fighting my sanity 2004-07-03 ch 2,	abuseHAHAHAHA! LOL! I'm laughing so hard, dude! Enna requested this to me (kinda.. she mentioned it in her latest e-mail!) and I'm really liking it so far! Uber-funny! Update when you guys can! TTYL! =D
Sir Keilah 2004-06-20 ch 2,	abuseWow, they're quite the lively group at lunch time, aren't they? Interested as to who leonard is. I really like how you are developing these characters and making them into people. I look forward to reading more. -Keilah
vanburen 2004-06-19 ch 2,	abusepoor terrence! why does his life have to suck?? lots of yummy angst here! good job, update soon.
Magentian 2004-06-17 ch 2,	abuse^^ Heheh. Who needs a story? This is entertaining enough just reading the author's notes. Ahem. To business. I have to say, the Leonard bit really, really freaked me out. "It _speaks_ to us! cowers & spasms"
Magentian 2004-06-17 ch 1,	abuseOh, no! Poor Terrence! He takes everything seriously?? I feel so sorry for him... ^^ Yeah, this is me, LuvLuvG, devoted representative of the local Lagrimas coven, hehe. Enna said to check this out, so hence I came. ^^ It's very interesting... Terrence is so much more depthful than he appears. Yet it also scares me. Reminds me of this goofy lesbian mafia-boss at my school who's a manic depressive. Bad, bad memories. Hoping someone can teach him to lighten up. ^^ Anywho... very neat. I like the way that the writing style almost matches Lagrimas'... grins while looking at the author's note though Enna would have it that she knows why, it seems. :D Onward to chapter 2!
PhoenixoftheAshes 2004-06-16 ch 2,	abuseWow! You two, this story is comming along great! You've really brought the humor out amoungst the characters, I'm even starting to get attached to a few.. smiles and blushes mwahaha, you shall never know who tho.. 'Tis a mystery.
Black Locket 2004-06-16 ch 2,	abuseHehe quark. TRhis chapter was even better than the last one. I like seeing ito Terrence's head. It makjes me feel powerful. But Leonard scares me. How come noone noticed him talking to Terrence? Hurry and update! And And Life Goes On too. And Lagrimas! Tell Enna to upsdate Lagrimas.
weepingsilver 2004-06-15 ch 2,	abuseglances around insidiously QUARK!! Quark quark quark quark quark quark quark quark quark quark quark quark quark quark quark quark quark quark quark quark quark quark quark quark quark quark quark quark quark quark... The ghost of profile hackingness has returned, this time with an arsenal of quarks. I shall now indulge in an evil laugh. MUHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Now! To the Bat-Fax, Robin! scampers off
Lexandria 2004-06-14 ch 1,	abuseAs promised, my review! ok.. first of, I agree with Enna in her oppinion of Terrence, I, personally, like Toushin, and Caleb, and everyone better then him.. good, well-develpted character though! I kinda think he's selfish and shalow and doesn't realise how lucky he is to have a boyfriend who loves him! ( ask Enna about my oppinion of my ex, if you don't know... might explain a fiew things about my oppinion ^_^ ) very nicely written! did I say that allready? Seriously, though, though Terrence is unlikeable, in my own oppinion, he is very well thought out. psycologically, he makes sence, nothing is out of line in that respect.. uh.. by that I mean everything makes sence, his reactions to things and stuff... not like some things I read where, psycologically, they are way under-developed.. they have one mood all the time and no reason for it, and no reason for their actions eather. my complements on the wonderful character development (( ah-ha! that's the word I was looking for... )) um...-blinks- my brain stoped... OH! didja see the pics I did of Lagrimas characters? ( semi-shameless self promotion, even though no link is presented ) and.. isn't this a nice, long comment?
Sir Keilah 2004-06-13 ch 1,	abuseWow, I went to go read this and it's awesome. I am really looking to reading more of this. I think the concept for this story is really awesome, and it is nice to see more of a character who is just an extra in lagrimas. -Keilah
weepingsilver 2004-06-12 ch 1,	abuseTERRYIFOUNDATYPO!... So I fixed it and then decided to review. As you. Because that's fun! Uh.. I mean.. erm.. booming voice I AM THE GHOST OF PROFILE HACKINGNESS! I HAVE DISCOVERED YOUR PASSWORD AND YOUR E-MAIL AND LOGGED IN AS YOU AND LEFT THIS REVIEW! I ALSO ENJOY USING RUN-ON SENTENCES! LIKE ZIPPY! THIS IS THE GHOST OF PROFILE HACKINGNESS! AND REDUNDANCY! OKAY! SIGNING OFF!!
Gothiangel 2004-06-12 ch 1,	abuseAww... I wuved this! I loved the other one so I figured this has to be just as good, and it is! I can't wait for an update! Muy fantastico! Keep up the good work chicas! ^.^ Baibai... ~Gothiangel~

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