wow...awesome poem...i've definitely had the cinderella blues! great job, i loved the way you portrayed this

Good poem.

lol. A neat concept, the Cinderella Blues. I just love to see creative original stuff like this. Some subjects have just been done to death, you know? This is great!

I SO know what you mean. This year I had this SERIOUS crush on this boy. Well I did until I heard him talking to his friend and he said that he loved this other girl. Now, I've had my crushes call me a bitch to my face and I still liked them. But at that instint I was so disgusted that I never even thought about him again. This girl was so obviously fake. It was PATHETIC!
Well, the poem was AWESOME! You sort of didn't have right out rhymes like 'light' and 'bright', but more subtle ones. Great rhythem and pretty much great everything else.
Thanks a ton for the help. I sort of got the sense that some of my stanzas were out of place in 'A World That WAS Mine' but I wasn't sure why. Again THANKS!

I like the term 'dream bruise'. It's a good phrase to describe that feeling .

I like it... its very true and cool

*Smiles* I liked this poem, probably because i'm some crazed disney freak but still loved it!

I love the repetition of certain lines, because that gets the point across, but I also love how the poem doesn't seem entirely written for the purpose of declaring a point! It's written to be enjoyed rather than pondered, and well done too!

That was great. Enjoyed reading it- something different!

Wow! That was great! I love poems that rhyme! _ Awesome More poems more poems!

cute poem. i like how you made so many of the lines rhyme, i cant do that... must be my small vocab. But i can really related to that feeling of being jealous of perfection. This poem is good because I cant tell you exactly what it's about, but it makes perfect sense. I can see a few lines don't have perfect rhythem, but i'm a stickler for good flow. heh. good job. :-)