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no-one now 2005-01-11 ch 1,	Wow! I can relate to this! I feel like saying this to some people at times! It's really deep! Actually, also, I think someone needed to say that to me! It's really helped, thanks! :-) no more bottling up emotion!
Honey Nut Loop and m-j 2004-10-25 ch 1,	wow cool >love it. It's a small world after all, it's a small world after all. By the way there is a reason for that outburst. SOmeone reviewed some of my haikus and then i looked at there bio page and they know you. weird huh! btw the reviewer was glitz faery.
Eternal Aeris 2004-06-27 ch 1,	hey jake, yeah, um, uh...what was i gonna say? It's really important...I'm hungry! Uh...that wasn't it...oh yeah! write more poems...i wrote a song called "Where You Are"...could you look it over for me as soon as I get back. Please go easy, but help me make it sound pleasing because it's a song in memory of my dad. I miss my friends...julia left me a message before she left...she was crying...and cat is gone, and erin will be gone before i get back...i feel so lonely...but at least i have you and tascha! i'm happy that i have such great friends who always watch over me and love me like a little sister. that's why i'm so thankful i have you guys..it's like there's no room to be sad! that's why i'm always happy...so there's mark's answer...only i told you and not mark...oh well...he really hurt my feelings on the last day of school. anyway, write more soon! i miss you lots and lots and lots and lots and lots! oh yeah, i got you a present! i hope you like it! your friend... lilah PS- I know I'll never be as special to you as julia, but i'll try my best to be a great friend so you won't ever feel alone...but of course i'll give you your space...hehe...TTFN tah tah for now...power to tigger!
RedHotHope 2004-06-08 ch 1,	I agree with everything in there (well, maybe not the first stanza). It was really well written, and the form works very well with it. great job :)
defectbychoice 2004-06-08 ch 1,	Awesome poem. Though I agree with you the title doesn't do it justice.
Alucardx03 2004-06-08 ch 1,	This poem really spoke to me. It describes what I try to be and what I try to strive for on a daily basis. Very well written.
Rachel Faith A. Teknoman 33... 2004-06-08 ch 1,	^_^ I'm liking this...
caks 2004-06-07 ch 1,	definetely true. so many people i know dont talk about anything our think about their feelings and they get all depressed and stuff and that's bad... i love this style its awesome caks ps- german is cool!! im german only am bad at speaking and i want to go there!! lol bye
til-iburnout aka Amanda Hel... 2004-06-05 ch 1,	There's not enough time in my day to read and review all of your stuff, which you update so quickly. Luckily summer v-cay is right around the corner. Simply put I like it, not one of my favorites of yours but still really good. I like the format for it. It worked well. keep writing- Amanda
lalamushu 2004-06-05 ch 1,	holy cow...this is a very well written poem. it's like...you're looking at someone who you're ashamed of, because he/she doesn't have the guts to do what he/she knows he/she has to do. great writing. and thank you for faithfully reviewing my work.
Tom Madden 2004-06-04 ch 1,	awesome job! great message! keep up the great work!
Wrathful Diana 2004-06-04 ch 1,	Cool poem, it's got an interesting pattern but it seems choppy and you spelt 'bear' wrong, 'bare' is an adjective, you meant 'bear' used as a verb meaning to carry (not as the big fuzzy animal/noun) grammar is my obsession. Your poetry is awesome at getting a message across and you keep it so that the reader doesn't have to guess. Nice job. ~Nymph
Nessa Minyatur 2004-06-04 ch 1,	Sometimes, respect is a key in friendship and relaitonships. Such a quality is hard to find in anyone. Hope you will never loose it. C ya later your homie g apple
Ente 2004-06-03 ch 1,	cool. like how there's groups of three lines with the two that go together and then the third that wraps up that thought. so anyway, it's good, conveys teh feeling really well. =)
Eagle Seance 2004-06-03 ch 1,	deep, deep. Great as usual. I'm lost for words myself. : )

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